Tuesday 5 June 2012

Collaborative Story Part 2

Read part 1 at georgiakellyac.

And shortly after that speech, Detective Jones was confronted with his first witness: Horace Bennett. He gave a vivid description of how an old French man driving a tractor, delivering some fruit to the market had gone to unload the fruit from his tractor, when the tractor began to move backwards without anybody in it. It proceeded roll and take out the old French man, then a queue of 7 people waiting to buy fruit were run over. Then the tractor reversed over the fruit stand to hit a building. The shock caused a person to fall out of a balcony.

Upon hearing this account, detective Jones ordered a thorough search of the tractor to identity the cause of it to reveres without human intervention. And soon enough, the investigation revealed that the old French man had left the parking brake off. So it seems that the old French man was to blame. But, upon further investigation, the hand brake was in fact on, just the lever to apply it had moved to the off position. But, how could this be? The tractor had moved backwards with it on!

1 comment:

  1. Nice. Good on you for getting this up and continuing it on :)

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